Today I’m
happy to welcome my dear friend Kathy Bosman to my blog. And let me just say,
Dragonfly Moments is a must read! Don’t
forget to enter at the end of the post for a chance to win something awesome. Take
it away Kathy…
In stop
five of my blog tour today, I’m going to talk about a character’s vision or
aim. Thank you, April, for hosting me in your blog.
Every main
character in our book must have a life goal, something that they’re aiming to
achieve or desperately need in their lives. Oftentimes, love either conflicts
with that goal or is the goal but
seems out of reach. Tessa’s goal is to get her art gallery going but deep
inside, there’s something burning – a desire to start a family. She’s even stashed
some paintings away of a mother and child, art that speaks of her all-consuming
need and desire. If she can just have that family with a man and kids, she will
be happy. She’s over thirty and wants to start yesterday and thinks she’s found
the perfect father material in Mark, a steady, kind, but rather distant
boyfriend. She’s just waiting for Mark to give her a marriage proposal.
On the day
Tessa’s old crush, Ryan, visits her at her gallery, Tessa expects to get a
proposal. It’s Valentine’s Day and Mark is taking her out for a fancy meal. The
setting sounds perfect. They’ve been serious for about a year. She’s waited
long enough. So, when she sees Ryan again, once at her gallery and again at the
restaurant, she’s very uncomfortable with the feelings that resurface.
Ryan has
come back into her life at the right time but Tessa thinks it’s the wrong time.
Mark’s date turns out to be a disaster. Ryan stands by Tessa as her
relationship begins to crumble but is his love strong enough for Tessa to give
up her obsession with having a child? Especially when she falls in love with an
orphaned baby …
Oftentimes,
this all-consuming goal of the protagonist is masking some hidden pain or the
real need they have. This is the case with Tessa.
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Excerpt:
“You’re making a mistake, Ryan. Coming in here and trying to bring
up the past. It’s too late now. I’m committed to Mark and have found a life for
myself. You never wanted me then. You loved Annie.”
“I didn’t love her. I loved you. And you promised forever….”
His voice was resigned, and then he winked at her as if to dispel
the tension. It did no such thing.
The letter at the back of the sketch had promised she would love him
forever, hadn’t it? She had believed she would never love anyone as much as
Ryan and that he showed her what true love was.
“You never loved me.” She dropped her gaze onto her lap. “We were
just good friends.”
Pushing up her chin to pretend that her heart wasn’t zinging with
emotion, she started to walk toward the one wall to adjust a painting. He
grabbed her hand. She tried to pull away, but he firmly pulled her close.
Heat and energy radiated off him and his manly scent encompassed
her. Even his breath was a sweetness she wanted to drink in. She took in the
shape of his face, his mouth which drooped slightly to the left, his skewed jaw
line and the prominent cheek bones. His eyebrows were dark and perfectly
shaped, and he had such long eyelashes. Yanking her burning hand away, she made
sure her back was facing him.
“I was blind to the true treasure. All the time when I was going out
with Annie, I really wanted you, but I couldn’t do that to her—dump her for her
best friend. I’ve loved you for years, Tess. I’ve been trying to find you. No
other woman has measured up, and I’ve had several relationships. And you’ve
become so beautiful.”
She faced him, her mouth partially open, devoid of words. He’d loved
her? Why didn’t he tell her then before it was too late?
His gaze followed her from head to foot, and heat branded her face
while a spark ignited her body.
“But I wasn’t then. You thought I was ugly. You must have because
Annie was so beautiful and you never looked at me.”
“I did. Besides the kohl and black clothes, you were adorable,
especially in your pajamas.”
Tessa wasn’t usually one to blush easily, but fire lapped up her
whole face and neck. “But the way you used to look at Annie. She had the most
stunning legs. Long and muscular.”
Ryan smiled. “You have better legs than Annie.”
She pulled back. For a moment, he had her in a trance. Maybe she
should leave Mark and pursue this. Jump right in. No, of course not. Who was
Ryan now, anyway? She hardly knew him. He could disappear again. Mark cared for
her and he was the perfect match to build a family. That’s all she needed.
Author Bio
Kathy loved reading and writing from early
childhood, but her dream to write books was put aside until her kids were
small, and she had little mental stimulation. The writing became a passion as
well as her love for romance. She hasn’t looked back since writing her first
romance novel in 2007. She homeschools her three children so in between
deciphering algebraic problems for her teenage son (with little success),
conducting science experiments, and tackling piles of laundry and dishes, she
miraculously finds time to write books and read many others for fun.
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Thank you, Kathy. Great having you over!
Thank you so much, April!
ReplyDeleteGreat post ladies. Ah, those damn goals. They often get in the way of what we want don't they? Our minds are set on what we think we want and then something (or somebody) comes along and makes us question everything! Dragonfly Moment sounds like a delightful read!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Kathy. I found myself thinking of (and analysing) my protagonists and their goals while reading your post. It's a good reminder. Great excerpt too.
ReplyDeletePersonally, I always find it hard to believe the 'I was dating your best friend, but you are the one I always loved' line. Some authors nail it, so I am curious to know how you made it work for Tessa and Ryan
Thank you, Empi. It was a hard one to work with but my editor helped me not to make it sound too ridiculous, lol.
DeleteI'm not quite sure you can have a story without character goals, even if it's lives a day at a time. Great post. I'm looking forward to reading this one, Kathy.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad, Kiru!
DeleteCongrats on your new release. This post also made me wonder about my characters' goals, that might be what's missing from my current WIP, so thanks for the pointer. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Celeste. So glad it helped!
DeleteI really liked the excerpt you shared with us today. Dragonfly Moments sounds wonderful.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your release!
Thank you, Casey!
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